Rhetorical Analysis:
The title and headline Melissa Anderson chose for her review
of In Time was exceedingly catchy and contemporary. By mentioning the "99
percent" in the headline you can tell she assumes her audience is well informed
with current political news and events. The outside cultural and political
connections made in the very first sentence paint a good picture of the genre and
theme of the movie. By comparing the
film to Bonnie and Clyde you get an excellent idea of the genre and by saying
that they both owe as much to The Marx-Engels Reader, you know it’s about a
social, political, and economic theme. She then goes on to summarize the basics
of the plot and mentions past work by the director. I think she effectively
makes a real world connection with the lob-sided economic system in the film
and our very own social economic inequalities. Overall this review is
informative, simple and concise.
The description of the synopsis is pretty basic and provides a good picture of the structure of the plot without giving too much away. Although she makes it clear that the fictional aspects of the film (like not aging after 25) may seem a little crazy, and sometimes silly, it may just not be the case so much in Hollywood; where being eternally young is a priceless fantasy. She introduces the characters smoothly within the plot summary and goes into some detail about the dialogue that further illustrates the conditions of their futuristic world. For example, she gives a quote from one of the characters: “These are confusing times: Is she my daughter, my sister, my mother, or my wife?”
The description of the synopsis is pretty basic and provides a good picture of the structure of the plot without giving too much away. Although she makes it clear that the fictional aspects of the film (like not aging after 25) may seem a little crazy, and sometimes silly, it may just not be the case so much in Hollywood; where being eternally young is a priceless fantasy. She introduces the characters smoothly within the plot summary and goes into some detail about the dialogue that further illustrates the conditions of their futuristic world. For example, she gives a quote from one of the characters: “These are confusing times: Is she my daughter, my sister, my mother, or my wife?”
Although a positive review thus far, the criticism is left
for the final paragraph. She again highlights on the silliness of the
unrealistic plot holes. It is also insinuated that the movie may have too many
subplots and how some details are unexpectedly incredulous. She continues to use the political comparison
about the theme of the movie to current left-wing politics and socialism.
Past projects from the main actors are mentioned but they
aren’t praised. The cleverness continued when she jokingly claims that the
director used the Marx principle of “from each according to his ability” to
choose his cast because they performed well compared to their previous
projects. You are left with a clear sense of what type of movie this will be
but also lowers the expectations greatly. It leaves the audience with the hope
that although it isn’t an excellent movie by far; it’s still not agonizing to
sit through.
Organization:
Title: Uses a clever and original title converging the title
of the movie with the main actors’ name.
Headline: Makes an instant political connection to describe the theme of the movie
P#1: Compares it to a classic movie of the same genre
P#2: Briefly describes the plot and introduces director, mentions previous work and continues to describe the conditions in the setting of the film
P#3: Goes into more details about the plot synopsis and introduces main characters and their struggle/conflict
P#4: Continues the political connection made in the intro using humor and exaggeration. Also points out the flaws of the movie while giving some praise to this latest performance by the main actors in comparison to their previous works.
Headline: Makes an instant political connection to describe the theme of the movie
P#1: Compares it to a classic movie of the same genre
P#2: Briefly describes the plot and introduces director, mentions previous work and continues to describe the conditions in the setting of the film
P#3: Goes into more details about the plot synopsis and introduces main characters and their struggle/conflict
P#4: Continues the political connection made in the intro using humor and exaggeration. Also points out the flaws of the movie while giving some praise to this latest performance by the main actors in comparison to their previous works.
Things that stand out/effective:
1.
The title and headline are really original
2.
The political comparisons illustrate the theme
very well
3.
It is concise and only gives only the details
needed to get a good idea of the plot without giving too much away
4.
Narrows it down to where it gives the reader a
good contrast for them to easily decide if it’s something they would enjoy or
not
2 comments:
Daniel,
This is a really thorough analysis. You do a great job here. You write, " By comparing the film to Bonnie and Clyde you get an excellent idea of the genre and by saying that they both owe as much to The Marx-Engels Reader, you know it’s about a social, political, and economic theme." Reading this, I surmised that the review is coming from a certain "type" of publication given the high-brow allusions. Bonnie and Clyde is an old film, and though it's been replicated in various incarnations, the average reader may not know what it is. Certainly this average reader isn't going to be familiar with the Marx-Engels reader (the average grad student in a humanities program probably will). A well-studied, very current "self-educated" reader who has a deep connection to the arts might also get both of these references. I haven't seen the film, but these connections make me somewhat interested in it.
Complete analysis seems to be an underestimate! I didn't feel inferior about my blog post, but now I certainly do...kudos to you for setting the bar a bit higher. I saw In Time and was certain that I didn't care for it. After reading this, I am not so sure any more.
Did I mention that you broke this down really really well?
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