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Opening Paragraph: “American food policy has long been rife with head-scratching
illogic. We spend billions every year on farm subsidies, many of which help
wealthy commercial operations to plant more crops than we need. The glut
depresses world crop prices, harming farmers in developing countries.
Meanwhile, millions of Americans live tenuously close to hunger, which is
barely kept at bay by a food stamp program that gives most beneficiaries just a
little more than $4 a day.”
Major Players: This paragraph clearly
establishes the writer as critical of what we might call the agricultural
industrial complex and the government and in support of the poor/food insecure/those
on SNAP. The social
class divide the piece highlights is already clear, and this makes sense, as
this opinion piece is an entry in TNYT’s “Great
Divide” series.
(The Great Divide is a series on inequality — the haves, the
have-nots and everyone in between — in the United States and around the world,
and its implications for economics, politics, society and culture. The series
moderator is Joseph E. Stiglitz, a Nobel laureate in economics, a
Columbia professor and a former chairman of
the Council of Economic Advisers and chief economist for the World Bank.)
The problem/conflict: “For the putative purpose
of balancing the country’s books, the measures that the House Republican caucus
is pushing for in negotiations with the Senate, as Congress attempts to pass a
long-stalled extension of the farm bill, would
cut back the meager aid to our country’s most vulnerable and use the proceeds
to continue fattening up a small number of wealthy American farmers.”
Side note: Look at how
the language used bolster’s the writer’s argument: “meager” aid to the “most
vulnerable” as compared to “fattening up” and “wealthy” for the other group.
Diction clearly aids in making this assertion.
Illustration of problem: “ Small, powerful interests — in this case, wealthy
commercial farmers — help create market-skewing public policies that benefit
only themselves, appropriating a larger slice of the nation’s economic pie.
Their larger slice means everyone else gets a smaller one — the pie doesn’t get
any bigger — though the rent-seekers are usually adept at taking little enough
from individual Americans that they are hardly aware of the loss.” The “pie”
metaphor is an easy-to-understand, visual illustration of the problem.
Concession, which
illustrates anticipated objection: “While the money that they’ve picked from
each individual American’s pocket is small, the aggregate is huge for the
rent-seeker. And this in turn deepens inequality.
This concession/conceding of a point to the opposition – the
amount each American will lose is small – is offered to acknowledge the likely objection that the proposed changes don’t
affect individuals all that much so therefore their benefits are far greater.
The rebuttal comes quickly; after all, it’s in the same
sentence: “the aggregate is huge for the rent-seeker. And this in turn deepens
inequality.”
Essentially, this means that these small, individual losses
mean giant games for a small, powerful minority . . . and this is a problem
because it will deepen the divide between the rich and poor. (The piece’s intro
foreshadows this rebuttal by noting that “ . . . wealthy commercial operations
to plant more crops than we need . . . [while] while, millions of Americans
live tenuously close to hunger.”
The rebuttal is offered again, this
time in different, perhaps more powerful terms, here: “It takes real money,
money that is necessary for bare survival, from the poorest Americans, and
gives it to a small group of the undeserving rich, in return for their campaign
contributions and political support.”
Concession #2: “FARM subsidies were
much more sensible when they began eight decades ago, in 1933, at a time when
more than 40 percent of Americans lived in rural areas. Farm incomes had fallen
by about a half in the first three years of the Great Depression. In that
context, the subsidies were an anti-poverty program.” By acknowledging that
farm subsidies used to be morally and economically justified (the two kinds of
justification the author says the current proposals are not), he appeals to
those in favor of subsidies by acknowledging their usefulness . . . at one
point.
Restatement of the
significance of his argument:
Remember, the author’s thesis is this: “[these proposals] would cut
back the meager aid to our country’s most vulnerable and use the proceeds to
continue fattening up a small number of wealthy American farmers.” He
restates the significance of this
argument in his final paragraph/sentence: “For these proposals to become law
would be a moral and economic failure for the country”.
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