REDUNDANCY/REPETITION
1.
She argues that
today’s technology is capable of so much.
2.
This is a well
thought out persuasive spin of the film. The reader was persuaded to believe
the movie borders on being pornographic.
3.
This shows that
Henry is enjoying his life in New York.
4.
This proves
that it was Henry’s choice to come play in New York.
PASSIVE
VOICE
1.
In a recent
blog enter the author argued whether or not we are raising our children in a
world over saturated with technology.
2. Some say that infidelity can ultimately ruin a relationship.
3.
There is a wide
age group and an even wider opinion about “Targeting…”
WORDINESS
1.
Or will we
become dependent on technology that will have machines cater to our every need,
like in Pixar’s “WALL-E”?
2.
Andrew O’Hehir
wrote about “Breaking Dawn”.
3.
Infidelity is
not just an affair but the point when couples begin to mend their broken relationship.
4.
Parents want
their children to do whatever they are truly interested in.
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