Redundancy/Repetition
-The technology coming form our cars and houses almost gives them human like intelligent features.
-The choice of words and quotes may leave readers thinking the film is somewhat pornographic.
-The author mentioned that Henry is enjoying his New York life through quotes.
-In the article Henry talked about how he wanted to play in New York
Passive Voice
-The Huffington post argues about whether or not children are going to be smart from technology.
-A good counter argument from the article read "infidelity can ruin relationships."
-The moral standpoints coming from readers after viewing "Targeting Slutty Students" not only came from youth, but from older generations as well.
Wordiness
-What really is the cause of humans being so dependent on techonology?
-Andrew O' Hehir reviewed "Breaking Dawn part 1", the 4th film of the "Twilight Saga."
-Infidelity is the start of couples putting together broken pieces of their relationship.
-Parents are starting to see the inconvenience of their kids not doing what they truly enjoy.
-Brent Hyden
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