1. Through use of humor, she argues that the technology in cars and houses make them capable of a lot.
2. By choice of diction and quotes, this is a well thought out piece that persuades the reader to believe that the film borders on pornography.
3. By using this quote, the author suggests that Henry is enjoying his life in New York.
2. 4. This quote proves Henry’s choice
of going to New York to play.
PASSIVE VOICE
1. Her
recent blog entry in the Huffington Post
raises a good argument on whether or not we set up our children for failure by
raising them in a world over saturated with technology.
2. The
counter-argument, or concession, states the possibility that infidelity
ultimately ruins a relationship as well.
3. The
comments that readship makes about “Targeting..” assume the range in age and a
wider range of moral standpoints.
WORDINESS
1. Or
are they the pebble that initiates a landslide of being dependent on
technology? Take Pixar’s “WALL-E” for example; where there is use of hover
chairs and machines catering to our every need.
2. O’Hehir’s
article is about the film, “Breaking Dawn: Part 1”.
3. Infidelity
is held as not just an affair. It is held as the point at which couples begin
to put the broken pieces of their relationship together and make it something
whole.
4. This
unconventional choice comes from the belief that parents want their children to
pursue what they are interested in rather than being stressed from undue
burdens.
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