REDUNDANCY/REPETITION
1. By stating “We don’t need to read maps; we get our geography by an officious sounding person who lives in a little window in our dashboard” she demonstrates a humorous tone that supports her belief that our houses and cars can function on their own.
2. The writer leads the reader to believe that the film is borderline porn
3. According to the author “insert quote”, Henry is enjoying his life in New York.
4. The author says “insert quote” which is proof that Henry wanted to play in New York.
PASSIVE VOICE
1. In her recent Huffington Post blog she argues that we are setting our children up for failure in this world of technology.
2. The counter-argument is that infidelity can ultimately ruin a relationship.
3. The difference in age and morals is shown by the comments readers made about “targeting”.
WORDINESS
1. If we stay on this path will we end up in a world dependent on technology like, “Pixar’s “WALL-E””?
2. Andrew O’ Hehir's article is on the fourth film in the Twilight Saga, “Breaking Dawn Part 1”.
3. Infidelity is not just an affair but a point where couples can start to mend the relationship.
4. These Parents choose to have their children learn in what they believe is a stress free environment.
i hope i did this right :/
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