How I party on a Friday night: Sentence Editing.

-REPETITION-

1.  X’s demonstrates her humorous tone by saying, “We don’t need to read maps; we get our geography by an officious sounding person who lives in a little window in our dashboard.” This implies that our cars have minds of their own.

2.    Direct quotes from the makers/director/whoever of the film persuade that “*MOVIE TITLE*” walks a thin line between pornography and a PG13 movie.

3.    X quotes this/uses this quote to show that Henry is enjoying his life in New York.

4.    –INSERTQUOTEHERE- proves that it was Henry’s choice to come to New York.

-PASSIVE VOICE-

1.    X argues that we are setting up our children for failure by raising them in a world dependent on technology in her recent Huffington Post article.

2.    This concession states that infidelity can ruin a relationship as well.

3.    The comments on “Targeting” show that the range of reader’s ages brings an even more broad range of moral standpoints.

-WORDINESS-

1.    If we follow down this path will it one day lead us into a technology dependent world like in Pixar’s “WALL-E”?

2.    Andrew O’Hehir writes about the fourth film of the Twilight Saga, “Breaking Dawn”.

3.    X holds infidelity as not only having an affair, but as a point of realization for couples to repair their relationship.  

4.    Parents make this unconventional choice because they want their children to pursue their dreams- without the stress of traditional schooling. *assuming this is the homeschooling article